Don't forget your sensory details, even though this is just an idea, haha. Besides that, it was good :)
I liked that you added a memory about the food, but maybe you could add details like what cascaron is and maybe some ingredients that are used to cook it. Other than that, it was pretty good.
Don't forget your sensory details, even though this is just an idea, haha. Besides that, it was good :)
ReplyDeleteI liked that you added a memory about the food, but maybe you could add details like what cascaron is and maybe some ingredients that are used to cook it. Other than that, it was pretty good.
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