Shkadoosh!
Shakabooih!
We
are loud.
We
are funny.
We
think we are awesome.
But
we are misunderstood.
He
is the misjudged warrior that dominates if you give him the chance
I am
the basketball player that owns in the background.
Although
we seem confident and loud on the outside
We
doubt our abilities on the inside
Inside
us lurks a monster called failure
We
are afraid of failing.
He
is afraid that he can’t save china from the deadliest warrior
I am
afraid I will meet someone can destroy me.
But
we also love to have fun.
Be loud.
Be with friends.
And be around our family.
We
love to make people laugh and give people joy.
Our
friends may doubt us but in the end we always get support.
Our
family is always there to give us wise advice.
We
like to hang out with friends and family.
We
love to make them laugh.
We
bring them joy.
Who are
we?
We are
the character that makes everyone crack up.
But have
a deeper side to us.
Hes the big fat panda
I am the ballin human
Remember this poem is not a comparison between you and your chosen allusion. It is a poem about you but referencing/alluding to your chosen character to show how similar to yours is. Please see me for revisions. AS(1)
ReplyDeleteI think you need to make your poem more about yourself. You're talking too much about the allusion and how it compares to you. Talk more of yourself.
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